The Island was microscopic.
The palm tree had razor sharp leaves, it almost kill a man.
The Tropical Island bathed in Sunshine.
the food was good at the start but now it's starting to get old now we are running low on food and the food we have is gone off.
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Hello Kory
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your blog blurb I liked how you used descriptive words in your blurb. I also liked your drawing that you drew of the island. Maybe you would like to tell us a little bit more about your learning and what your task was.
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Kia ora Kory I like your drawing you can draw better than me. Ilike how you describe about the leafs were razor sharp.you should add the birds and the waves in the picture. from Cordell
ReplyDeleteHey kory
ReplyDeleteI love this picture looks like you spent a while doing this. Enjoyed your dtory