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Thursday, June 10, 2021

the colossal seas


 

1 comment:

  1. Mōrena Kory!
    This is a really great piece of writing! I like the way you have used lots of descriptive words. When I read it, I can picture the ship in my head. I wouldn't like to get zapped! What inspired you to write this?
    Miss Ribotton

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