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Wednesday, June 16, 2021

you are going to get apple like a crumble


 

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8 comments:

  1. CarlosJune 16, 2021 at 10:41 AM

    Hi Kory i like story but why the aut is living it's self?

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  2. TysonJune 17, 2021 at 9:16 AM

    Hi Kory it is very cool I like the store (:

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  3. JasonJune 21, 2021 at 10:50 AM

    Kia ora Kory,
    I really like how you described descriptively what it is like to be an ant. This blogpost reminds me of another person that did the same thing. Maybe next time you could reread your story to make sure it makes sense. What was your favourite part of writing this story?
    -Jason

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  4. JoshJune 21, 2021 at 10:50 AM

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  5. JoshJune 21, 2021 at 10:51 AM

    I think this is a great piece of writing and I think yon did a really great job the only think that I find confusing is that the writing is on the other sideof the page? I am guessing that you ran out of writing space and you had to do that? anyways maybe next time you could correct your writing that doesent make sence so it would make sence.
    And why is some of the other font bigger than the others?
    Sencerly Josh<

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  6. ZacharyJune 24, 2021 at 9:18 AM

    hey Kory this is really cool. I think its great that you described being an ant so this is really intuitive. maybe next time you could add some more text and maybe do it on a google doc.

    bye from Zac :)

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  7. TysonJune 30, 2021 at 10:23 AM

    think this is a great piece of writing and I think yon did a really great job the only think that I find confusing is that the writing is on the other sideof the page? I am guessing that you ran out of writing space and you had to do that? anyways maybe next time you could correct your writing that doesent make sence so it would make sence.
    And why is some of the other font bigger than the others?

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  8. JacobJune 30, 2021 at 10:59 AM

    Kia ora Kory. I really like how you created foot life apple story like carlos. Maybe next time you could add more text? From Jacob.

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