I was a pupil at Belfast School and this blog is where I shared my learning. This blog has been archived, no further content will be uploaded or added. You are welcome to continue viewing posts, however commenting has been disabled.
Thursday, July 1, 2021
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I really like This post because it is accurate to the story and well drawn maybe next time you should put in some text.Overall its an awesome post and I think its cool.
ReplyDeleteBye from zac.
Hello kory, I really like hit the target the story, i also like you storytelling it is so accurate to the story. Maybe next time you could maybe coulour it in maybe even PURPLE?
ReplyDeletedo you mean purple guy
DeleteHey Kory you did awesome.
ReplyDeleteThe drawings look just like they do in the story.
Next time you can add a description for what happens in the pictures.
Kia Ora Kory
ReplyDeleteI Like your blog post and how you added a photo.
Why did you do his task and how long did it take you?
Maybe next time you could add a short blurb telling the reader about this post.
Have a great day
Emma